Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, 21 May 2021
3 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hi Jen, I'm Lily from NBC.
ReplyDeleteYour blog post looks very nice.
The plants and sun make it look really good.
The only thing is that it is hard to read parts of it.
What app did you use to make this?
Hi Jennifer, My name is Elliott and I’m from NBC.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your blog post on Personification.
My favourite part was the background.
You taught me a lot about personification.
Maybe next time you could underline the part that you are trying to explain?
What app did you use to make tits D.L.O?
Bye, Elliott.
Hi Jennifer, my name is Amelie i really like the colours and how you did your layout!
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