Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Monday, 15 June 2020
The Crayons That Quit
Jennifer,
Black Crayon here.
Listen up buddy!
I've written you this letter because I want to tell you how I feel.
I remember the days when you always used to use me,man they were happy days.
But now you use the Grey Crayon instead of me, and now i'm stuck with Beige crayon in your old crayon box. Beige crayon always makes me look the opposite way ever since you peeled of his papers, he's VERY Embarrassed.
Ever since you brought that new crayon box you've forgotten about me!
I would really appreciate if you would use me more.
Your new black crayon makes fun of me because you use him a lot now.
You just look at me then look the other way.
Your very sad friend,
Black crayon.
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Excellent work Jennifer. I love your comment about the wrappers being peeled off. Keep it up!
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